Zoie Uznis
Mr. Provenzano
Honors American Lit.
3-25-12
The Window
The beat up, red, Dodge Stratus twisted and turned through the dark woods in the Upper Peninsula on dark and stormy fall evening. Within the car sat the very aggravated Jones family. Mr. Charlie Jones had come up with the idea of a family camping trip to celebrate his bonus and his three children’s hard work in school. However the thought of checking the weather had completely slipped his mind.
“You know if you had just stopped and asked for directions none of this would be happening right now,” said his annoyed wife Shirley Jones.
“Yes dear, I know that but it would have lost us even more time then we already have. Besides we aren’t lost I just took a wrong turn. All this rain is getting to my head.”
In the backseat, pushed together like a can of sardines, sat their three children Maurine, Donald, and Abigail. Maurine, the oldest at the age of fourteen, sat attempting to read while her two younger siblings, Abigail being nine and Donald being five, sat pinching each other.
“Could you two please just-“ Maurine’s sentence was drowned out with a large popping noise. The car swerved in and out of the road, barely dodging trees as it tore left and right.
“The brake!” screamed Shirley. “The emergency brake!”
Charlie grabbed the emergency brake and pulled it up as hard as he could. The car screeched to a sudden, terrifying halt and silence took over the vehicle.
“So,” Shirley said breaking the silence. “Did we pack the spare or did that slip your mind too?”
“Shirley, please not now,” said Charlie. “You all stay in the car. I’ll walk ahead and see if there’s any places with a phone we can use.”
“This is the worst trip ever,” mumbled Maurine under her breath.
Charlie shot her the “watch you tone young lady” look as he stepped out of the car.
“Nobody leave this car you understand?” he said. “I’ll be back in a half hour. There’s food under the seats if you get hungry.”
And with that he waved and walked away into the darkness ahead until it looked as if it had swallowed him whole. Now, Charlie was not the bravest man to walk the Earth but it wasn’t his courage that stopped him from reaching his full potential. No, he lacked the average man’s common sense. As he walked down the road, the rain drenching him and seeping through his coat, he whistled “Old Susana” as if he had not a single care in the world. Then out of nowhere, bolt of lighting lit up the sky and revealed to him an old Victorian mansion just yards ahead of him. Charlie stopped whistling and sprinted towards the ghastly house. As e got closer he saw that the entire front of the home was a giant plate glass window. Through the window he saw flickering candlelight and could hear music seeping through the walls. He rushed towards the house and under the rotting awning that covered the doorway. He knocked and the door and it slowly swung open. As he walked inside, his eyes were to busy taking in the old home that he completely missed the frayed old banner that hung above him. It read, “1865 The War Is Over!”.
Charlie walked through the towering, ebony doors and was revealed to, what he assumed, was a costume party. The women danced properly in large ornate dresses that reminded him of “Gone with the Wind”. The men were adorned in suits and top hats. All of a sudden the music came to a stop. All of the party guests were focused on him with an almost hungry look in their eyes. One man, who was the host Charlie assumed, stepped forward and looked him directly in the eyes with a look that made Charlie feel as if he was looking directly into his soul.
“Well, well, well,” the man said. “Who do we have here?”
“I’m Charlie, Charlie Jones. My car broke down a few miles back. My wife and children are in there waiting for me and I was just wondering if you had a phone I could borrow.”
“What in the name of all that is good is this telephone?” said a man dressed head to toe in black velvet.
“I believe our good friend Charlie here is speaking of the new-fangled invention Mr. Alexander Graham Bell is constructing,” said the host who then turned back to Charlie. “Forgive me. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Orville Smith proprietor and founder of Smith’s Apothecary.”
“It’s a pleasure to meet you,” said Charlie. “But wait, you said that the telephone hasn’t been invented yet?”
“Oh no sir. At least not for out usage.”
Charlie slowly put the pieces together. Something was not right. These people, why were they so confused? It was 2011 of course there were telephones. Almost everyone carried on around either in their ear or in their pocket. There was something very odd going on. Either these people were very talented actors or he had just walked into a very large problem.
“I should really be going then. My family is in the car waiting for me,” Charlie said as he slowly backed towards the door.
“Oh no, no, no!” said Orville. “You cannot leave. You see once you step onto the other side there is no way to get back.”
“The other side of what?”
“Well you see- no wait it will be easier just to show you. Follow me,” Orville said as he led Charlie up winding ballroom staircase. Charlie stumbled and looked down to see that the black carpet that was covering the stairs had strange, random stains all over it.
As they reached the top of the staircase Orville made a sudden sharp left turn. They found themselves facing what looked to be a broom closet. Orville opened the door and a set of old wooden stairs was revealed.
“Watch your step,” Orville said as he smiled widely at Charlie. With a little nudge Charlie began to approach the step and climbed them one by one.
“Is this the attic?” he asked Orville.
“Oh yes it is. So observant you are. It holds all of the homes dearest treasures and secrets.”
“What do you mean secrets?” said Charlie as he reached the top of the stairs. With every step a horrid, rotten smell filled his nose.
“Look around you will see.”
Charlie squinted into the darkness and took a step forward. His foot landed down on something hard and when he put his weight onto it he heard a loud crack of a bone. He startled backwards and he realized what the smell was. He was surrounded by bodies. Twenty or so stacked neatly upon each other, completely decayed.
“What happened here?” Charlie asked in a hushed whisper.
“Well you see there were some disagreements after the war. Let’s just say the winners opinion was not one of everyone’s,” Orville replied.
“I don’t understand. What happened? Who killed these people?”
“Is it not obvious? I did of course. All those silly people, wanting freedom for all. Don’t they see the difference between us? We aren’t equal and we never will be.”
“But if you killed them how are you still alive?”
“You silly man. I have not been alive for hundreds of years. This home has a curse. You may die in it but your soul lives on in a perpetual state on earth. I guess you could say that we are all ghosts, ghosts who are forced to stay here and watch the world grow through that window, for it is the true passage from life to death.”
“But I am not dead am I? I feel very much alive”
“You are alive my friend but you won’t be for long. You see it isn’t really fair for you to stay here living and torturing the rest of us with what we want most. Oh no, you will be like us soon enough.”
“But my wife, my kids! They are out there all alone. They will come find me!”
“True, and when they do their fates will be the same as yours.”
“You cannot control fate! You’re insane! If you are a ghost how can you kill me?”
“It is not I that will kill you, it is the house. You see whether you or I like it or not you can’t leave. Once you come in it won’t let you out. You end up killing yourself out of madness.”
The thought sunk in to Charlie’s brain. His death was inevitable here so why not just finish himself why he could? He bent down and picked up the snapped bone.
“If what you say is true then I have no point I torturing myself,” Charlie said. He took the end of the bone that was splintered like a knife and held it in front of his skull. He took a deep breath and drove it clean through his head. His scream was so loud that it shook the panes of glass in the window. As he dropped to the floor a misty, blue veil of air came out of his mouth and materialized above his body. Out of the mist came a man who looked like Charlie with a stunned expression on his face.
“Welcome to your new home Charlie,” Orville said as he began to laugh manically. “Come, let us greet our guests.”
The two men walked down the stairs. Orville returned to the guests while Charlie walked to the window. From the inside of the home he could see his car waiting for him. He looked closely at the window to see his new form in the faint reflection but saw nothing but a green orb of light. The window was his new master. It was the veil between life and death and the wall between him and the life he could never return to.